Author Topic: (Walfas W.I.P.) Touhou Hifuuroku (東方秘封録) ~ Hakurei and Usami  (Read 399 times)

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Currently working on a slice of life comedy series where Reimu, Marisa and Sumireko get into shenanigans while trying to maintain peace and order in Gensokyo. Intended to be a homage to old Walfas content, including the original Touhou Flash comics and the works of the Walfas community. A proper animated series is planned, but can be downscaled to comic form if necessary.

Right now looking for feedback on the script before I move forward with the project.

--Synopsis--

Hidden in rural Japan is a region called Gensokyo. Here, the shrine maiden Reimu Hakurei and her magician friend Marisa Kirisame attempt to keep things in order. Joining them is Sumireko Usami, a young psychic from the Outside World, who has her own issues to deal with after her classmate Mei Watanabe accidentally discovers Gensokyo. After more incidents happen, it becomes clear that these happenings are more than just coincidences. The group also gets into lots of comedic hijinks. What? Did you expect something dark?

--Series Pitch Bible--
Goes over recurring characters and story concepts.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1M8QJdXSdreWtHs8Qdrf3W_Zfgls8F0vebGO-nW4ZK3k/edit?usp=sharing

--Public Draft (W.I.P.)--
Just the script for the pilot episode. Public because I have a messy version filled with a lot of notes.
As of April 2, 2022, Part 1 of the draft is finished, with Part 2 currently being written.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WXpSAO3N7H0VacgCf7XUweeFkLjyips4Qpsfz5oB5Zw/edit?usp=sharing
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ooo sounds like fun, good luck working on this! i look forward to reading/watching it!

Thanks. As I'm still writing the series, I'm looking for feedback on the draft for the pilot episode, as well as suggestions on where to go forward with it.

Update: Part 1 of pilot episode is finished. Part 2 is currently being written.

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Update: Part 1 of pilot episode is finished. Part 2 is currently being written.
Much Thanks for BOTH your good perseverance about writing,update-announce and feedback-seekinh (hopefully also but not limited to) the MotK forum with your Touhou Fan-Tale ( linked and inspired to certain extents to " Touhou Walfas " and " Touhou Walfas on Deviantart  ) of "  Touhou Hifuuroku (東方秘封録) ~ Hakurei and Usami " !
 
A clearing,maybe seemingly hairsplitting, question,if you please , especially if it is not a spoiler or unsettled element . At the beginning of the document
" --Public Draft (W.I.P.)-- https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WXpSAO3N7H0VacgCf7XUweeFkLjyips4Qpsfz5oB5Zw/edit?usp=sharing "
there is the Premising Description of " Se1S1Ep1 Draft "... Is its full meaning Se(ries)1S(eason)1Ep(isode)1 Draft"?
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Yeah, "Se" does refer to "Series". I don't actually expect my project to go that far, but I just type that Se1S1Ep1 phrase a lot, and it kind of stuck. If things go well, maybe I'll consider spin-offs.