Hakkero of Light

[Kirisame Cola]

Hello there! Kirisame Cola/Tenshisad here, and today I'm here to share current working prose for a new fic of mine!

After falling out of interest with LaVG and the direction it was going, I decided to abandon the fic and start working on a new one that focuses a lot more on cannon characters, and my main idea for this was what I'm calling Hakkero of Light (HoL) as I'll call it from here on out.

What is HoL?

HoL is a fic that takes place between the events of Touhou 5 and 6. The fic follows Marisa Kirisame and the struggles and hardships she has when it comes to making her Mini-Hakkero. It's a simple prose but I feel like it has lots of potential to go into a side of Marisa I see uncommonly explored in fanfics.

As of right now, HoL is in its pre-writing phase, and I'm still working on the notes for the fic, all of which I'll link below to help people get a better grasp on the story and the themes I wish to convey. All sorts of criticisms are welcome! Along with this, I'd also like to see how some of you on here would like to see how the story would go! So please feel free to pitch ideas too!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1U7sqCHOhjDqTQ4ug7SfBaSRL3aJibaYvP_2Kqwew6MI/edit?usp=sharing

[Branneg Xy]

Hello there! Kirisame Cola/Tenshisad here, and today I'm here to share current working prose for a new fic of mine!

After falling out of interest with LaVG and the direction it was going, I decided to abandon the fic and start working on a new one that focuses a lot more on cannon characters, and my main idea for this was what I'm calling Hakkero of Light (HoL) as I'll call it from here on out.

What is HoL?
HoL is a fic that takes place between the events of Touhou 5 and 6. The fic follows Marisa Kirisame and the struggles and hardships she has when it comes to making her Mini-Hakkero. It's a simple prose but I feel like it has lots of potential to go into a side of Marisa I see uncommonly explored in fanfics.

As of right now, HoL is in its pre-writing phase, and I'm still working on the notes for the fic, all of which I'll link below to help people get a better grasp on the story and the themes I wish to convey. All sorts of criticisms are welcome! Along with this, I'd also like to see how some of you on here would like to see how the story would go! So please feel free to pitch ideas too!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1U7sqCHOhjDqTQ4ug7SfBaSRL3aJibaYvP_2Kqwew6MI/edit?usp=sharing

1st of all,thank you for your writing work.

Then,as as question :  are they going to be synopses,or recaps or linking references or (sort-of?)charts or etc., during "important story-joints" and/or foreshadowing ?

Lasty as a suggestion: if a character's" Negative Trait is Converted to a positive one" wouldn't you agree is better to change its definition,such as Marisa's twice-listed "Prideful" would be clearer "(Negative-Themed)Pridefully Confident/Prideful Confidence(following:description that it is a mix of negative and positive trait,like you have done so rightly)" to "(Positive-Themed)Hard-Working/Skillful Confidence/Confident"?

[cloudshift]

read it! quite interested!
from my perspective,marisa might be ok to have a little tiny bit of flaws to be more acceptable or cute