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OkuuFallout

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Touhou Cruelty of Verisimilar Existence
« on: March 02, 2022, 02:34:32 PM »
Hello everyone. Let me get straight to the point: I have a piece of fanfiction I am working on. It was originally meant to be a RP thread on here, but as I was drafting the initial post, I figured that a story format would be better. Since it was meant to be a RP thread, it is written in the 2nd person perspective. I made a post on Twitter about this too, so I'll paste it here along with the link.

After I pasted this, I realized I made a typo in this website's url. Whoops.

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Wish I could make this Tweet only go to select people, but oh well...
#touhou #東方Project
Hi whoever's reading this. An ambition came to me recently to host a Touhou RP thread on http://shirnemaiden.com . However, as I was drafting the initial post, I thought that a roleplay format wouldn't be the best. As a result, I have decided to create a work of Touhou Project fanfiction.

I haven't changed the general idea from the RP thread, but the plot is still developing, as I prefer writing with whatever comes to mind, and change it later if needed.

I'm still working on the final title, but for now, I'm calling it "Touhou Beyond the Fourth Wall - A Yukari Story".

I have little experience with creative writing, but I am still fairly confident in my abilities as a writer. The last time I tried this was in 7th grade and was about Barney the Purple Dinosaur being a demon from Biblical Hell. My writing teacher LOVED it, not for the story (although that may have been part of it) but for the general craftsmanship.

Overall, I'm saying that this is my first piece of fanfiction that I've ever tried. As it was once meant as a RP thread, it is in the 2nd person POV, with the primary pronoun of "you". If you want to see my work so far, I have it on a Google Doc so people can see my progress.

Thanks for listening if you've read everything thus far. The link is below if you are interested. Thank you!

Later, after the initial posts...

Oh yeah. There is some Yukari x Ran shipping, but nothing really obscene comes up. Also I'd like to add that this shipping may or may not affect my current Yukari x Reimu shipping preference, but it's too soon to tell.

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The link won't show since it was embedded in the post, but I'll link it below:


I look forward to everyone's thoughts. Thank you!

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Status: 3 May 2022

Hello once again, I'm here to say that I have changed the document that was previously linked into my old draft. From now on, I will be editing on a different document. This is because I would like the format to be a little more like an actual novel. I have also "published it to the web" for easy reading rather than watching me edit and looking at the edit history, but it looks a little weird because of the formatting in the document.

Thanks again for the support!

NEW Document Link

"Published to the Web" Link
« Last Edit: May 03, 2022, 04:50:35 PM by OkuuFallout »

Branneg Xy

  • +EARTHLY MIRROR of + the TRINITESANCTISSIME+
  • HOLIEST AND SACRED FAMILY :JHS+M(ARY)+I(OSEPH)
    • Branneg Xy
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Re: Touhou Beyond the Fourth Wall: A Yukari Story (Working Title)
« Reply #1 on: March 02, 2022, 09:15:09 PM »
Thanks for your constant work and your submitting of it here for us all.
This reminds me somehow of the "format of a variant Touhou CyoA  "I have read quite some time ago.
The "variant" ,if you are interested and it could be help,was/is indeed by its " apparently Full-Fanfiction format despite the Full-CyoA common trend" ; "Apparently" because  "  well-placed surprise presence of CyoA Choices for the readers-players first complementary and then story-weaving-explainig CyoA choices "

« Last Edit: March 05, 2022, 05:45:22 PM by Branneg Xy »
1.+This Real Photo "... and the WORD became Flesh", had been shoot by a Modern-Time Desert Father(Desertic Catholic Christian Community Monk+Ascetic) during THE HOLIEST CONSECRATION-MASS:The HOLIEST FAMILY of NAZARETH ALWAYS MYSTICALLY EVER-PRESENT and with ALSO THE CRISTCHILD BLESSING-https://www.newadvent.org/cathen/05573a.htm#section3 , in EVERY HOLIEST MASS-HOST CONSECRATION BY the Ordanied PRIEST(S).
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OkuuFallout

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Re: Touhou Beyond the Fourth Wall: A Yukari Story (Working Title)
« Reply #2 on: March 03, 2022, 03:06:46 AM »
Thanks for your constant work and your submitting of it here for us all.
This reminds me somehow of the "format of a variant Touhou CyoA  "I have read quite some time ago.
The "variant" ,if you are interested and it could be help,was/is indeed it is with its " apparently Full-Fanfiction format despite the Full-CyoA common trend" ; "Apparently" because  "  well-placed surprise presence of CyoA Choices for the readers-players first complementary and then story-weaving-explainig CyoA choices "

I guess I should have specified. This will NOT be a CyoA-style work. I figured that it would be best for writing if I followed my own path. I was just saying that the 2nd person perspective is used in it, but it's not interactive.
However, I have plans to create a RP thread after I am finished with the story, so look forward to that.

And thanks for your acceptance. It feels nice to know that perhaps someone will read this and appreciate it.

OkuuFallout

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Re: Touhou Cruelty of Verisimilar Existence
« Reply #3 on: March 03, 2022, 01:38:24 PM »
Update

Decided on a title.

Touhou Cruelty of Verisimilar Existence

Otherwise known as Touhou CoVE


Branneg Xy

  • +EARTHLY MIRROR of + the TRINITESANCTISSIME+
  • HOLIEST AND SACRED FAMILY :JHS+M(ARY)+I(OSEPH)
    • Branneg Xy
    • (YOUTUBE by title;LINKEDIN by link) https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCiD63dZE4IvxDzRJ9NphWbw" FRA ALU BI Darcanix ")
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Re: Touhou Beyond the Fourth Wall: A Yukari Story (Working Title)
« Reply #4 on: March 05, 2022, 09:23:02 PM »
I guess I should have specified. This will NOT be a CyoA-style work. I figured that it would be best for writing if I followed my own path. I was just saying that the 2nd person perspective is used in it, but it's not interactive.
However, I have plans to create a RP thread after I am finished with the story, so look forward to that.

And thanks for your acceptance. It feels nice to know that perhaps someone will read this and appreciate it.

You are very welcome  :extend:.
A coupler questions : if you have already decided or leaning more toward 1 then the other, will the RP-thread be a "RP-Parsing like the known MotK format ", "the ore wide-spread Mostly-Traditional CyoA format "  or " Something In-Between"?
Same as before,will Touhou CoVE be Loosely or Closely Related to that?
Thank you very much  :extend: .
1.+This Real Photo "... and the WORD became Flesh", had been shoot by a Modern-Time Desert Father(Desertic Catholic Christian Community Monk+Ascetic) during THE HOLIEST CONSECRATION-MASS:The HOLIEST FAMILY of NAZARETH ALWAYS MYSTICALLY EVER-PRESENT and with ALSO THE CRISTCHILD BLESSING-https://www.newadvent.org/cathen/05573a.htm#section3 , in EVERY HOLIEST MASS-HOST CONSECRATION BY the Ordanied PRIEST(S).
2(++RECOMMENDED+++) https://adoration.tyburnconvent.org.uk -https://tyburnconvent.org.uk
3.Youtube Channel/half-collections/half-references :
" FRA ALU BI "

OkuuFallout

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Re: Touhou Beyond the Fourth Wall: A Yukari Story (Working Title)
« Reply #5 on: March 07, 2022, 02:11:28 PM »
You are very welcome  :extend:.
A coupler questions : if you have already decided or leaning more toward 1 then the other, will the RP-thread be a "RP-Parsing like the known MotK format ", "the ore wide-spread Mostly-Traditional CyoA format "  or " Something In-Between"?
Same as before,will Touhou CoVE be Loosely or Closely Related to that?
Thank you very much  :extend: .

The RP thread will be more like the MotK format, but the written story will not have a Choose-your-own-Adventure style, if that's what you're asking.

Branneg Xy

  • +EARTHLY MIRROR of + the TRINITESANCTISSIME+
  • HOLIEST AND SACRED FAMILY :JHS+M(ARY)+I(OSEPH)
    • Branneg Xy
    • (YOUTUBE by title;LINKEDIN by link) https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCiD63dZE4IvxDzRJ9NphWbw" FRA ALU BI Darcanix ")
  • Gender: Male
Re: Touhou Beyond the Fourth Wall: A Yukari Story (Working Title)
« Reply #6 on: March 09, 2022, 02:42:13 PM »
The RP thread will be more like the MotK format, but the written story will not have a Choose-your-own-Adventure style, if that's what you're asking.
(Thanks for constantly updating it by the way) I see,thank you,but I was also asking if the RP is going to be more closely related(more involved, similar to the the current Point of View-Narration and Plot) or more loosely ( more  "indirectly involved,complementary" ,mostly unlike the current PoVN and Plot) or even still up for (your own) decision depending on the "proceeding way" of " Touhou CoVE".
« Last Edit: March 09, 2022, 02:44:45 PM by Branneg Xy »
1.+This Real Photo "... and the WORD became Flesh", had been shoot by a Modern-Time Desert Father(Desertic Catholic Christian Community Monk+Ascetic) during THE HOLIEST CONSECRATION-MASS:The HOLIEST FAMILY of NAZARETH ALWAYS MYSTICALLY EVER-PRESENT and with ALSO THE CRISTCHILD BLESSING-https://www.newadvent.org/cathen/05573a.htm#section3 , in EVERY HOLIEST MASS-HOST CONSECRATION BY the Ordanied PRIEST(S).
2(++RECOMMENDED+++) https://adoration.tyburnconvent.org.uk -https://tyburnconvent.org.uk
3.Youtube Channel/half-collections/half-references :
" FRA ALU BI "

OkuuFallout

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Re: Touhou Cruelty of Verisimilar Existence
« Reply #7 on: March 09, 2022, 05:06:34 PM »
(Thanks for constantly updating it by the way) I see,thank you,but I was also asking if the RP is going to be more closely related(more involved, similar to the the current Point of View-Narration and Plot) or more loosely ( more  "indirectly involved,complementary" ,mostly unlike the current PoVN and Plot) or even still up for (your own) decision depending on the "proceeding way" of " Touhou CoVE".

The RP thread will have the same general plot, but as far as the relation to the current state of the written story, the only thing that will be more or less the same is Chapter 1. The rest will most likely be changed to be more fit into a RP thread format.

Branneg Xy

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  • HOLIEST AND SACRED FAMILY :JHS+M(ARY)+I(OSEPH)
    • Branneg Xy
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  • Gender: Male
Re: Touhou Cruelty of Verisimilar Existence
« Reply #8 on: March 24, 2022, 10:33:09 PM »
Question :has this Story enterec a Temporary/Undetermined Hiatus or the Next Chapter(s) require more Effort,Length,etc?
Thank you for your work.
1.+This Real Photo "... and the WORD became Flesh", had been shoot by a Modern-Time Desert Father(Desertic Catholic Christian Community Monk+Ascetic) during THE HOLIEST CONSECRATION-MASS:The HOLIEST FAMILY of NAZARETH ALWAYS MYSTICALLY EVER-PRESENT and with ALSO THE CRISTCHILD BLESSING-https://www.newadvent.org/cathen/05573a.htm#section3 , in EVERY HOLIEST MASS-HOST CONSECRATION BY the Ordanied PRIEST(S).
2(++RECOMMENDED+++) https://adoration.tyburnconvent.org.uk -https://tyburnconvent.org.uk
3.Youtube Channel/half-collections/half-references :
" FRA ALU BI "

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Re: Touhou Cruelty of Verisimilar Existence
« Reply #9 on: March 26, 2022, 03:18:22 PM »
Question :has this Story enterec a Temporary/Undetermined Hiatus or the Next Chapter(s) require more Effort,Length,etc?
Thank you for your work.

Oh yeah. I haven't worked on it in a while, huh? I'll get back to it soon hopefully, I honestly forgot about it (^^;
Thanks for the reminder!

Branneg Xy

  • +EARTHLY MIRROR of + the TRINITESANCTISSIME+
  • HOLIEST AND SACRED FAMILY :JHS+M(ARY)+I(OSEPH)
    • Branneg Xy
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Re: Touhou Cruelty of Verisimilar Existence
« Reply #10 on: March 28, 2022, 12:31:33 AM »
Oh yeah. I haven't worked on it in a while, huh? I'll get back to it soon hopefully, I honestly forgot about it (^^;
Thanks for the reminder!

 :heart:
Thanks reciprocically for you and the fast reply : it has an had been adequately  good and with adequate potential so far (Chapter 4).
1.+This Real Photo "... and the WORD became Flesh", had been shoot by a Modern-Time Desert Father(Desertic Catholic Christian Community Monk+Ascetic) during THE HOLIEST CONSECRATION-MASS:The HOLIEST FAMILY of NAZARETH ALWAYS MYSTICALLY EVER-PRESENT and with ALSO THE CRISTCHILD BLESSING-https://www.newadvent.org/cathen/05573a.htm#section3 , in EVERY HOLIEST MASS-HOST CONSECRATION BY the Ordanied PRIEST(S).
2(++RECOMMENDED+++) https://adoration.tyburnconvent.org.uk -https://tyburnconvent.org.uk
3.Youtube Channel/half-collections/half-references :
" FRA ALU BI "

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Re: Touhou Cruelty of Verisimilar Existence
« Reply #11 on: March 28, 2022, 03:30:47 PM »
:heart:
Thanks reciprocically for you and the fast reply : it has an had been adequately  good and with adequate potential so far (Chapter 4).

Yeah of course. I've started working on the story again, so look forward to that.

Branneg Xy

  • +EARTHLY MIRROR of + the TRINITESANCTISSIME+
  • HOLIEST AND SACRED FAMILY :JHS+M(ARY)+I(OSEPH)
    • Branneg Xy
    • (YOUTUBE by title;LINKEDIN by link) https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCiD63dZE4IvxDzRJ9NphWbw" FRA ALU BI Darcanix ")
  • Gender: Male
Re: Touhou Cruelty of Verisimilar Existence
« Reply #12 on: April 22, 2022, 12:23:15 AM »
Yeah of course. I've started working on the story again, so look forward to that.

Are there,but hopefully not, some issues or blocks ,though of courseLife&NeighBours&Related ones need 1st priority ? The tale stopped at the very first beginning of Chapter 4.
Thank you again for writing,announcing,releasing,updating.
« Last Edit: April 27, 2022, 11:34:23 PM by Branneg Xy »
1.+This Real Photo "... and the WORD became Flesh", had been shoot by a Modern-Time Desert Father(Desertic Catholic Christian Community Monk+Ascetic) during THE HOLIEST CONSECRATION-MASS:The HOLIEST FAMILY of NAZARETH ALWAYS MYSTICALLY EVER-PRESENT and with ALSO THE CRISTCHILD BLESSING-https://www.newadvent.org/cathen/05573a.htm#section3 , in EVERY HOLIEST MASS-HOST CONSECRATION BY the Ordanied PRIEST(S).
2(++RECOMMENDED+++) https://adoration.tyburnconvent.org.uk -https://tyburnconvent.org.uk
3.Youtube Channel/half-collections/half-references :
" FRA ALU BI "

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Re: Touhou Cruelty of Verisimilar Existence
« Reply #13 on: April 22, 2022, 12:51:41 PM »
Are there,but hopefully not some issues? The tale stoopedat the very first beginning of Chapter 4.

Thanks for getting back to me. I've been pretty busy lately, so I haven't gotten around to the story. I will try to find time sometime soon, but I can't promise anything. Thank you!

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Re: Touhou Cruelty of Verisimilar Existence
« Reply #14 on: May 03, 2022, 04:52:28 PM »
Status: 3 May 2022

Hello once again, I'm here to say that I have changed the document that was previously linked into my old draft. From now on, I will be editing on a different document. This is because I would like the format to be a little more like an actual novel. I have also "published it to the web" for easy reading rather than watching me edit and looking at the edit history, but it looks a little weird because of the formatting in the document.

Thanks again for the support!

NEW Document Link

"Published to the Web" Link

As it says, the previous link is dead. Please use these instead. Thanks!

Branneg Xy

  • +EARTHLY MIRROR of + the TRINITESANCTISSIME+
  • HOLIEST AND SACRED FAMILY :JHS+M(ARY)+I(OSEPH)
    • Branneg Xy
    • (YOUTUBE by title;LINKEDIN by link) https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCiD63dZE4IvxDzRJ9NphWbw" FRA ALU BI Darcanix ")
  • Gender: Male
Re: Touhou Cruelty of Verisimilar Existence
« Reply #15 on: May 07, 2022, 12:31:57 AM »
As it says, the previous link is dead. Please use these instead. Thanks!
Confirming that the Both of them works and are dislaying correctly,thus thanks  :spells:back to you until other thanks for Adding Story and Chapter Tales  :lives: in the future .
1.+This Real Photo "... and the WORD became Flesh", had been shoot by a Modern-Time Desert Father(Desertic Catholic Christian Community Monk+Ascetic) during THE HOLIEST CONSECRATION-MASS:The HOLIEST FAMILY of NAZARETH ALWAYS MYSTICALLY EVER-PRESENT and with ALSO THE CRISTCHILD BLESSING-https://www.newadvent.org/cathen/05573a.htm#section3 , in EVERY HOLIEST MASS-HOST CONSECRATION BY the Ordanied PRIEST(S).
2(++RECOMMENDED+++) https://adoration.tyburnconvent.org.uk -https://tyburnconvent.org.uk
3.Youtube Channel/half-collections/half-references :
" FRA ALU BI "